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Proud to be you
Glad to walk next to you
Privlidged to watch you
Yet longing to hold you

For years now
I have sat and watched how
They have torn through you in a prowl
Never did you fight back
Never was it your turn to attack.
Now, mentally scarred,
Believing them you had harmed
When in truth, in your zeal
They openend a wound that can never heal
As they told you their pain you have caused
As you cried I -paused-
When your eyes filled some,
Tears escaped, then the gleam was gone.

All I've been in the past
Was a shoulder to rest upon
Your guardian in this world so vast
But something new is at dawn
Maybe now, somehow
I can hold you close
And love the pain away
Day after day
©2004-2009 ~novadiem
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I thought I had posted this one already but I guess not. Comments appreciated

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:iconclearlymysterious:
wow! thats beautiful and sad, deserves a :+fav:! :clap:

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~MizzerieDebauch ..."Because, we are all covetous creatures..."
:icondarkillusi0ns:
This is, like she said, beautiful. I can't find really anything signnificant enough to criticize. It flows really nice, and I just like overall how you wrote it, I can relate to it in some ways.
Well, I just have to favourite this...keep up the awesome work. :nod: :+fav:

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"My knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight- so hold on tight. Kiss me one last time- shut your eyes..."
- It's Dangerous Business Walking Out Your Front Door - Underoath
:icontruth-hurts:
Wow, thats amazing. Its so pure.

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Respect is just a minimun

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